We think that this answer is quite good as the person uses plenty of terminology and examples to back up her opinions. Her examples are very detailed as it describes what happens in the advert, date it was released etc. Even though she has plenty of terminology, it is quite repetitive for example, nuclear family is mentioned too much which makes it seem like the person has forgotten the other theories and that is the only one she can remember. The analysis in this piece is good as they back up their examples well and have plenty of evidence.
Terminology: 6
Evidence: 15
Analysis: 14
Overall, we have given this person a Level 3.
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