Positive and Negatives of example answer.

Positives: 
In the example answer we were given to analyse, we feel that there were a number of both positives and negatives. Some of the positive points that we found were the use of terminology and the examples these points were backed up with. The writer of this piece named 3 theorists, Althusser, Marxist and Geraghty and Butler. The writer then explained what the theories meant very clearly and thoroughly.


Negatives:
However, we thought the analysis was poorly written due to the fact that it wasn't detailed enough seeing as you get most of your marks from the analysis. The analysis let them down as they included lots of terminology and examples which was their strongest areas.


Terminology: 6-7 Level 3
Example: 8 Level 4
Analysis: 4-5 Level 2